Sunburst/Paul's Musings

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I have a rather large stash of poems I have written

I have mostly kept it hidden til I started a long process of uploading and writting

here are some that span from yesterday to a Late 2007

all done by my unless otherwise

To start things off

"New Way Home"

It has been 5 days
since I went on this road
It scares me that I have no clue where I am going
a long road it is
a long road that has been ruined everywhere

Silence ehcoes the valley
it seems I am very far from home
I have left my old life for good
it seems only yesterday I left
when I have been down this road for a good 7 days
This road goes far
like the long road of life
if only it would end......

I search my past
asking myself how I got here
how I came to this road and decided to follow it to the end
I remember I had shout at my mother
cursed at my father
scolded my little brother
all in the name of peace

However
my mother and father still fought
the peace never came
everything seemed lost

I turned to friends
they never helped
so much for them
I guess it sucks in the end

Perhaps I will find what I seek
I don't know where I am
however I have come to see
this is a New Way Home
 
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Long Road to Ruin

Hey now
don't make a sound
the news was good today
a flag was taken down
another in its place
you carry much in you life
a stuborn heart that refuses to change

Maybe the seasons will change
as the color fades into the orange night
Dear Life I have sealed my fate
running through hell
the rest can wait

Long Road to Ruin
far down the path
under the cold sunlight
no tommorow
no end in sight

I will one day take this town
retire the king
and take the crown
I know a wall of shame
I know a field without a name

As I look
for every piece to fall in place
forever traveling
into space
Your horizon follows a shape
it is too late to turn back
no way
come now
the night is young
have a good time
while the road is long
have a blast
forget the past
all that matters is the road ahead
the one over the long horizon!
 

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I'm so glad you decided to do this, your writing is just incredible! :bigsmile:
I look forward to seeing much, much more of it! :inlove:
 
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Victory
Victory is a bright yellow
it tastes like a sweet cake
it smells like sugar
it feels like you have acomplished something
it sounds like cheering
 
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Bandit

I remember you
remember you when you were only 4 weeks old!
my gosh
you were so small
so cute
I am sure every girl that you would see
would fall in love with you before they saw your not so good side!

I watched you when you were quite young
you squeked at me
and eventually cooed for me

I cleaned your cage once
and you escaped once

I left your cage in the same room as my other guinea pigs
and you got out 3 times wanting to meet them!
that killed me
you escaping

you were quite the Houdini
I am sure he would have been proud himself
perhaps he would say
I am quite proud someone followed my footsteps
someone that is a rather interesting guinea pig

Now
you are quite big
you have multiplied in size since I last watched ya
I still have fun
you still are over-fed
but
I still love ya
even as I write this
I smile
smiling that you have always been an awesome pig
one that reminds me of mine.........

Rest well bud
I might see you again
you were always unique
and friendly!
 
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Phil

when I saw you
you were quite big
you were smaller than Bandit
well, now you are bigger than Bandit
heck with it
you are even more dominate

You were quite shy
I remember I tried to get that out of you
never worked
but it never hurt me to try

You are massive
you are a 24 ounce drink compared to Bandit
you are more agressive........

You are still nice
you don't try to escape like Bandit
however you hide much
hiding from everything
even from yourself

I give you much sympathy
I give you much respect
I hope you lead a better life
a life that can be enjoyed with your energetic buddy!
 
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something I did..... took some song names and made this

Untitled #1
You have your "Long Road To Ruin" and you know that happiness will be "Everlong". Life gives you questions like "DOA" but sometimes you can catch yourself saying something random like " Hey, There Johnny Park!" or reminding yourself that you need "The Best Of You" for your "Times Like These". All in all your "Summer" will always be good, but you keep asking yourself " Why Did You Let It Die?" but the good keeps comming with "Erase/Replace"ing everything to where things are good. You always know you will have " Friend of A Friend" to stay "Still". Things could always be "Hell" and you know you will always ask yourself "What If I Do?" when you have played " The Last Song". When taken alive you will scream "Free Me" and when everything fails you will try for a "Miracle". But in life you will always have "Another Round" of drinks "In Your Honor". You will always sit in the sun thinking that the day is a "Cold Day In The Sun".
 

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[QUOTE="sunburstlespaulhero1989, post: 2515743]I have a rather large stash of poems I have written

I have mostly kept it hidden til I started a long process of uploading and writting

here are some that span from yesterday to a Late 2007

all done by my unless otherwise

To start things off

"New Way Home"

It has been 5 days
since I went on this road
It scares me that I have no clue where I am going
a long road it is
a long road that has been ruined everywhere

Silence ehcoes the valley
it seems I am very far from home
I have left my old life for good
it seems only yesterday I left
when I have been down this road for a good 7 days
This road goes far
like the long road of life
if only it would end......

I search my past
asking myself how I got here
how I came to this road and decided to follow it to the end
I remember I had shout at my mother
cursed at my father
scolded my little brother
all in the name of peace

However
my mother and father still fought
the peace never came
everything seemed lost

I turned to friends
they never helped
so much for them
I guess it sucks in the end

Perhaps I will find what I seek
I don't know where I am
however I have come to see
this is a New Way Home[/quote]
Paul these are great....keep up the gooder work..penn
 

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OMG Paul!! Those are marvellous sweetheart.I love the way your mind works..very creative.Have you thought about getting them copyrighted hun?May be a good idea..they are here for the world to see.Something to think about maybe.You are a fantastic young man and so proud to have met you.
Big hugggsssssss..xoxoxo :inlove:
 
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[QUOTE="squirt, post: 2515973]that's very creative! lol :bigsmile:[/QUOTE]

indeed, sometimes I get random ideas like that and apply them:)
[QUOTE="PENNMTNS, post: 2515976]Paul these are great....keep up the gooder work..penn[/QUOTE]

Thank you sir! :bigsmile:
[QUOTE="Huggies, post: 2516555]
OMG Paul!! Those are marvellous sweetheart.I love the way your mind works..very creative.Have you thought about getting them copyrighted hun?May be a good idea..they are here for the world to see.Something to think about maybe.You are a fantastic young man and so proud to have met you.
Big hugggsssssss..xoxoxo :inlove:[/QUOTE]

Thanks
I do have what I have posted here copyrighted under the stash. The only thing that hasn't been copyrighted is the contest stuff I have done, which I might add tommorow if I find any quickly!
I am proud to have met you as well, I am sure we all could be great poets if we dug deep into the many miles we have gone in our lives......

BTW

if you are excited about these, well you haven't even touched the surface! :laugh:
my stash is bigger than anyone could ever figure!
not even the devil in Hell, Michigan!
 
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:laugh:

it would be hard to believe that this started the "Cheer Up" craze! :crazy:

Cheer Up!

Cheer Up
she may have broken your heart very badly
she may have messed you over too badly
she may have f*cked your life up
but
you still should be happy

Cheer Up
she stabbed you in the heart and back
she told you millions of lies you can't even remember
she used you as a pawn in her twisted game
she did many things that even the bible would consider a sin

Cheer Up
you are messed up
you seem to have no life to live
your life has crashed down
and there is nothing you can do
sit around being optimisitic
with a pessimistic side that is slowly taking over
knowing your life will get better
eventually
getting more impatient as time goes on
screw life
 
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*written about one friend, though I have found more*

Did You Ever Hear?

Did You Ever Hear?
that I once thought of you as a close friend
that I almost thought of you as family
that I almost thought of you as someone that always was around
But
that isn't really the truth
you moved far away
never kept in contact
only hearing from me years later
not seeming to give a damn about my life

What do I say?
I thought you were someone which,
turned out to be bullshit
your last words were so fake
faker than the shit I heard the past week
I wish I knew this
I got in way too deep
I could fill the rest of this poems with periods
periods to stretch beyond the end of this
all of that would be
the last of my friendship for you

Did You Ever Hear?
After you left I felt pain over you
the days that you never spoke to me
the words that you said that would be ever so true
well
it seems that you have gotten over me
found some new people who are better than me
people who aren't like me at all
whatever
I got better people now

I thought I never got over you
the one who was really close
someone who I soon replaced after you left
with someone new who respects me
I am over you
but everytime I hear of you
it breaks my heart
to hear that you don't even mention me
guess I am not apart of your past
a past that I was unfortunatly apart of

I was quite successful without you
I got far
I never needed you it seemed
but you left a big gap for me to fill
it isn't even filled right now
there is a void that I can feel in my life

Did You Ever Hear?
I will probably never tell you about this poem
I won't even put you in the credits
I won't even aknowlage you
I won't even share the money from publishing this poem
the only people who I will share it with
were those that listened to me
ones that had more pure friendship than you
ones who I owe my thanks to for getting over you
they are the ones who truely deserve it all
until then
I leave you nothing
like you did years ago
 

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[QUOTE="sunburstlespaulhero1989, post: 2517049]:laugh:

it would be hard to believe that this started the "Cheer Up" craze! :crazy:

Cheer Up!

Cheer Up
she may have broken your heart very badly
she may have messed you over too badly
she may have f*cked your life up
but
you still should be happy

Cheer Up
she stabbed you in the heart and back
she told you millions of lies you can't even remember
she used you as a pawn in her twisted game
she did many things that even the bible would consider a sin

Cheer Up
you are messed up
you seem to have no life to live
your life has crashed down
and there is nothing you can do
sit around being optimisitic
with a pessimistic side that is slowly taking over
knowing your life will get better
eventually
getting more impatient as time goes on
screw life[/QUOTE]

not for me, I was there! lol this is a great piece! :bigsmile:
 
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Well
once in a made up place
a place far from the reality of earth
a place in which rules of physics could be randomly broken
I lived

You see
I was a prince
and I had this rather nasty curse
that I could only say one word a year
I wish I could have called that witch
a crazy bitch for doing that to me
it made my life misreble

Well
I found this girl you see
she was quite nice
after spending sometime with her
I decided to propose to her
I had waited 5 years
and thought of something that I thought it would be bad
so
I waited 4 more years to say it
did I ever figure what was going to happen next!

I walked up to her
and said the words I had saved
only to hear
" Could you say that again?"

I was infuriated
I felt anger
I felt stress
I saw my dream love fall out of my grasp

Well
sadly for me
a random person proposed to her one day
she accepted
now we are just friends
which I really hate!

Anyways
after 10 years
I realized that I could have written it!
my gosh
I can't believe this
I was so freakin stupid!
now I am sure someone is laughing at me for this
and writting a poem poking fun at my unfortunateness